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Defeated … by the ballad
Apparently there is just something about ballads that I cannot write. Day 25 of the napowrimo had an exercise to write a ballad, and I just couldn’t do it. There is something about the rolling, rhyming lines of the ballad that I couldn’t do. Not that I can’t rhyme. I have written quite a few rhyming things in the past and all of them seemed to work fine. But the ballad seems an insurmountable obstacle.
Oddly, this isn’t the first time that this has happened recently with a ballad. I’ve also been working through exercises from Stephen Fry’s excellent ‘The Ode Less Travelled’, a book I would absolutely recommend to beginning or even advanced poets everywhere. What is an advanced poet exactly? I’m not sure. But anyway. There was an exercise in that book to complete a ballad started by Stephen, and I couldn’t do that either. I’d written one once before (done the same exercise) and all that kept popping into my head was the lines I’d already written. Clearly there is something about the ballad that drives one towards insanity, or at the very least, non-productivity.
So I shall end this quick post with a question or two. Have you ever run into a block when writing something, especially a ballad? Do you have any advice for me writing ballads? And finally, what on earth is your appendix for anyway?
Day 24 – Anagrammatica
My voice
Lacks rime
Or racks lime
If you prefer
I’m a Mac liker,
A cadaver kid/crave kid,
Chaser of evil drama,
It seems to trip me up
Acid, viral,
Possibly suicidal lemur
Experimenter
Card diva, card carrying chemist
Qi manipulator,
Random word particle accelerator.
Day 23 – triolet
A triolet is a poem of the form ABaAabAB where A and B are repeated lines and a and A rhyme, as do b and B. I’m sure I could make all that into a poem but I don’t think I shall.
It makes me think of diamond rings
the house all empty and decayed
a lonely voice, abandoned, sings
It makes me think of diamond rings
All falling and precarious things
An eye so pretty, yet dismayed,
It makes me think of diamond rings
the house all empty and decayed
Day 22 – Earth day
In the beginning was the word
And the word was ‘ouch’
And the word was in pain
And the pain was palpable
In the beginning was the word
And the word was ‘seriously?’
And the word was flabbergasted
And the word looked upon all that man had made and said
‘It is not good’
In the beginning was the word
And the word was considered
And the thought behind it was great
And from the word sprung many tiny violets
And the word was settled
And the word was peaceful
And the word was ‘earth’
Day 21 – Fortune cookies
I found a new place for prompts – thank you http://www.napowrimo.net/.
You will bring great happiness to others
You will be as fluid as mercury
You will travel to strange and unusual destinations, and stay inside the whole time you are there
You will meet a tall handsome stranger on the bus, and never say hello
You will fall in love and out of love and in love and out of love…
You will have a child whom you love above all other things
You will bring great unhappiness to others
Beware of those who throw tomatoes
You will never stop moving
People in glass houses with stones are probably up to no good
You will have an unhappy birthday
You will eat too much and feel bad about it the next day
You will never learn your lesson
You will stop, and in stopping, learn to live
Day 20 – Love
After today there are no more prompts on the prompts post I’m using. Does anyone have any ideas for prompts I could use?
So.
The sharp points
In days gone by
All pointed at me
And I said ‘Look at me’
Whereas now I would say the opposite
And by saying it I met you
Always sitting at the front of the class
(I always sat at the back)
You wore that skirt I loved
And clutched your books in slender fingers
And we crashed together like two waves bound for the same shore
And we held hands under the table
And I caught you when you jumped off the steps
In a puff of rosin
And we read together, our fingers entwined with the lines
You touched me like punctuation
We skimmed stones over the tai hei yõ
And I felt my present drift away
Like little fluffy clouds
There was an ocean of you
I could dive into
Sure, sometimes there were storms
And the waves would crash against the beach huts
And the rain would run down the buildings like tears
But, until the day I poured away the ocean
You always had your piano-slim hand in mine
And your smile brushed against me
Like light shining off the ocean
Day 19 – Guilt
A day behind again, sigh… I shall have to keep up better with myself
I remember
That day
When you wrapped yourself in my pixels
Sent that poisoned note
Written in my poisoned hand
With my poisoned arms around you
And I told you that those letters
Were each little lies
That they added up to deceit, slander and aspersion
Vile calumny
I poured out words onto the red hot surface
Watched them fizzle and disappear
And I never told you
That every horrible word
Was true
Day 18 – Betrayal
You are
Dark trickster
Hidden in the hollow of the hand
The pill
That opens the eyes
The coin
That flashes across the palm
These feelings
Are not my own
The locus of everything is this little white pill
And you said
That the pill would become a calendar
Would become a star
Would become the world
And now I am trapped
In the sphere
Of this little white pill
Link
Today you can find one of my pieces on Bad Robot Poetry. End statement.